Check out the new edited version of Chapter 1. I would mark the changes, but there are quite a few small ones. One section has been lengthened and two more small ones added. Did you find all the changes? Compare to the old version here.

I've decided to delete my Bravenet Services because of their new ads, so I've been busy replacing them. What do you think of my new counter? Please feel free to post news and events on my new Newsboard and please sign my new Guestbook while you are here. Thanks!

Also join us at the new Fanfic Forum at the Cats Community Forums. My old Bravenet Forum will be deleted at the end of this month. See you there!